Work With Jay

A Professional Guide for Story Creation

Screenplay Coverage & 75-Minute Feedback Call

Thoughtful feedback to uncover your story’s potential.

You only get one chance to make a first impression—so don’t submit your work until you’re 100% sure you’ve taken your story as far as it can go.

After years of RECEIVING FEEDBACK from studios, directors, producers, agents and managers, I know how to affirm what’s working, point out what’s not, and create the path to a market-ready final draft.

After a careful, in-depth read of your script, we’ll meet for a 75-minute one-on-one Zoom session to walk through detailed notes, hurdles you might be facing, and explore solutions—together.

It’s a collaborative, encouraging space designed to help you move forward with confidence.

Story Scout 5-Session Package

Let’s take the mystery out of writing.

While there are no shortcuts to a great story, there are methods to help take the mystery out of developing one. Once you discover the tools, confidence grows, and you'll start seeing solutions where once there were roadblocks.

This five-session journey is tailored to your creative goals—whether you’re starting from scratch, writing or adapting a book, crafting a talk, or revising an existing piece. In each of the five (5) hour-long sessions, we’ll unlock the potential of your story through a process that deepens your understanding of character, structure, plot, premise, theme, and more.

The result? Less stress, more progress, and a story that truly works.

  • Learn how to turn your idea into a script.

    Collaboration is my superpower.

    It’s hard to feel that amazing sense of discovery when writing a script—especially if you’re not sure where to go or where your scenes are taking you. This is happens at lot—and it used to happen to me!

    I have the tools to help you tell a great story and bring more confidence and joy to the process—so it’s no longer such a mystery. Most courses give you templates. I give you a creative partner.

    This is a hands-on, real-time collaboration with someone who’s helped creators bring ideas to life for decades.

    Together, we’ll develop a clear path into—and through—your story, moving step by step through the process to help you grow into the kind of storyteller who finishes what they start.

    Let’s bring your story to life.

    I work with a limited number of clients to ensure each one receives my full focus and attention. If you're seeing this page, spots may still be open. 

    Contact me for flexible pricing. Sample scripts available upon request. All services include private Zoom sessions + personalized materials.

  • Audiences love original stories—let’s bring your source material to life!

    My first writing assignment was adapting Winston M. Estes’ novel Another Part of the House for Oscar-winning cinematographer John Alonzo. Entrusted with this beautiful story, I immersed myself in classes and workshops, sought out mentors, and wrote a script that remains one of my most cherished—even today.

    Your novel, memoir, or true story can be adapted into a screenplay or series—I’ll show you how.

    Contact me for flexible pricing.

  • Already have a draft? Let’s elevate it.

    From dramas to family films to romantic comedies to thrillers (phew!), my stories have been read by nearly every major studio and network. I’ll help you identify what’s working, what’s not, and how to push your story further. My revision service includes detailed feedback, editing, and act-by-act strategies—guaranteed to improve your story and breathe life into the parts that need it.

    This is a natural second step after Screenplay Coverage & 75-Minute Feedback Call. Contact me for flexible pricing.

  • We can never underestimate the power of visual design.

    Thanks to a whimsical deck I created for a Disney pitch about a Little League team taking on visiting aliens—think The Bad News Bears of Mars— doors opened all over town. As a young writer, this got me an amazing agent.

    Since then, I’ve designed dozens of pitch decks and personally pitched HBO, Paramount, Universal, Netflix, Fox, Peacock, AMC, Onyx, and BET Studios, amongst others. I’ll help you craft the tools to create dynamic pitch materials—loglines, synopses, series bibles, and decks—that grab the attention of producers and execs.

    Contact me for flexible pricing: full deck design or creative input. Sample decks available upon request.

  • Some projects require a fast turnaround.

    I write full-length screenplays or pilots based on your idea, outline, or treatment—confidential and professional.

    Contact me for flexible pricing.

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